This is still genuinely the greatest work of fanfiction I've ever read. I know it's been years since you wrote it, but I still revisit it sometimes because it's just such a great story. I wish there was some way to know if you'd written anything else, or published any original works because I would definitely read them.

This is the second time I've read this story, but I now feel the need to review. This chapter is genius. I don't know entirely why, but the vibe it gives off is so perfectly suited to the rest of the story. It's such great foreshadowing.

Hi I like this story but I loved your story Teacher's Pet and i was hoping that maybe you would consider reposting it.

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. If I had a week, I may have come up with a mile long evaluation of this story and everything I felt and thought, but I'm afraid you'll just have to do with a 'wow'. So, wow.

I'm fairly certain that no words can describe my feelings for this story. It was just... amazing. I'd finished reading it a few months back and just found the old link again, and I knew that I just HAD to review. Everything was extraordinarily in character, and every development you introduced was followed through in a logical course. Stories like this are very few and far between. Just thinking of this story makes me feel like crying. This story brought a dull ache to my chest early on. Its that amazing. If I only had an ounce of what you can do... Maybe my muse wouldn't keep running away on me ).

~Vega Dreamer

OMG I love your story. It's probably the ultimate CSI fanfic. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I love the development of each of the characters, and the drama and the religious parallels and did I mention the *drama*? ;) Anyhow, great job!

I hate him. I hate that Flowers dude for what he did to Greg. I hate him so much I hope you make a sequel for the purpose of giving him a slow and excruciating death that's entirely based on his horrified screams and loud suffering. I hope he dies for KILLING GREG!

Wow, I *am* melodramatic. Haha, please make a sequel where Greg isn't dead and it's just a lookalike and the real Greg is all nice and peaceful in Norway. Please?

Please?

PLEASE?

*sob* YOU KILLED GREG! Why'd you do it like that? Like EVERY OTHER dude who dies in this show! You're...your just not nice! What do you have against him, huh? HE'S DAMN ADORABLE!

What a wonderfully written story!

I STILL can't believe you killed off Greg...I was reading this at 11:45pm and I said to myself that I'd go to bed after the chapter I was originally reading...and it happened to be the chapter in which Greg died...I haven't been able to stop thinking about this story all day!

I find the whole thing highly moving and I thank you for writing it!

This story was by far one of the best pieces of fiction I think I have ever read. It was an amazing read, and I couldn't put it down, so to speak. The development of each character was in-depth, the imagery was fantastic (fantastic is an understatement), and yes, it wasn't a *happy* story, but it was an utterly phenominal piece. Everything about this story explifies what it means to be an excellent writer. So very well done.

Hi, I just read through all of the chapters so I want to leave a review. I was thinking what to tell you, but it is so simple... This story is sad, yes, but also full of something else. It is well written and I am glad that I found it in time when it was complete - hand on my heart - I would go crazy if I cannot read it at once! o) I was smiling, I was crying. I hold my breath when I was scared and did not know what to expect. And... one more thing. I think you remind me someone whom I know, who would write the story almost the same way as you did - me.

Have a great time! And you too should read something cheerful, ok?

So i am saying goodbye with an excuse for my English - just learning, so I am sorry for mistakes.

So far I'm liking the story, but it's keeping me on the edge. I'm all nervous. This last chapter confused the heck out of me (and aroused some suspicions) but I'm too tired to continue now. It will have to wait until tomorrow. Did I mentioned I'm already hooked?

Great Story! It was really sad, but also really gripping. I'm so glad you decided to keep Sara alive, I think what happened to her allowed there to be some chance for a happy ending, even though that may not be what you were trying for, some of us hoped for it dispite your multiple warnings. Those warnings only draw people closer, and in the case of your story it was a good thing. This was a well rounded story without too much of anything, save perhaps drama. I think the only thing that could have improved this story was if you set aside a little more time for charictarization and a little less for non-stop drama.

...Damn.

That was fantastic. The BEST angst I think I've ever read in a long, long time, and probably the best CSI fic too. The characterization was perfect, and even though I prefer happy-ever-afters, I absolutely loved this story. Couldn't stop reading. And the ending was good. Very good.

Damn. :D

wow amazing job! I couldn't stop reading it. I think this is one of the best ones i've ever read!