Wow I hat that voice in Sam's head!

Wow. I bet they r****d her...

Crap. Stupid Sam for the suicidal attempt, stupid rapists ruining innocent lives, stupid Danny for not being over protective like all times!

This is truly depressing. I will read the second one, then.

For all of the people who are saying that Sam is out of character...think about it. She was RAPED. I don't think she would still be the same Sam that she usually is.

That whole story was disturbing. It also had nothing to do with Danny Phantom, besides the fact that you used their names.

Lots of typos. The plot is losing me. Pretty well based though. Some weird writing styles applied on this chapter. You might want to think about re -reading this again.

Okay. This is officially no longer a fan fic of Danny Phantom. Good story. Has nothing to do with Danny Phantom. AT ALL.

Oh no. All wrong. Sam and Danny don't even sound like Sam and Danny. Also, Sam wanted him to help her so badly and now she is pushing him away. It's like she's got split personalities here. This story is starting to lose me.

Internal struggle. Nice. Your story is getting better. You are also starting to capture the characters better.

I hated the ending, but the 8th grade graduation flashback was pretty good. The ending wasn't Sam- like at all. You opened the love - interest aspect to obviously at the end there. However... It was pretty good. Not bad writing. No typos. Creative. The ending of this particular chapter needs work, as I said, but good overall.

Oh yeah and, TUCKER'S PARENTS WERE GITH THERE! They could have dropped her off. And she loves messing with her parents, so she wouldn't have minded calling.

Okay. So Danny could have just flown her home. *face palm* This is getting a bit dark. Sam is no wimp either. She could have either called Danny for help or fought those men off herself with her skills. Besides, she always seems to carry a weapon with her. Lastly, you have a few typos. Proof-read again please.

I've said it once, and I'll say it again. The kids from the shows would never cut themselves or self- harm in anyway. Sam is the voice of reason in the trio. This would NEVER happen. I know she's dark, but she lives for her friends. Also, her parents would NEVER EVER get a divorce. All of this is so out of character. The one thing you got right was Danny' fluid movements from Fenton to Phantom. Compliments on that. Oh yeah. Sam's favorite spot is Danny's. THAT is where they meet, all the time. (Example: Sam knows to find him in his room, and knows how to get in through the window in the episode: Fanning the Flames, Season One) Try again.

I just read this in less than an hour. It was amazing, and very well written. I can't wait to get to the other books :D

~lisa

It turned out pretty good, this chapter. :)