Beautiful

M-Must...N-Not...Fangirl...!...OMFG THAT WAS SO EPIC! AMAZING STYLE OF WRITING AS WELL AS A CUTE BUT REAL STORY LINE?! PURE PERFECTION! FOLLOW, FOLLOW FOLLOW!...Now that that's outta my system

Baki-sensei almost sounds like baka-sensei XD

2004!man that's 9years ago

Well to me the romance is just right and baki is not in the story much but here are some tips baki is... Serious but he is kind and a really good sensi but even though he has to put up with gaara he is still nice to him I hope these tips help

This story is so good it must have been written by gaara himself...

Wow this by far the best story I have ever read in my life

Wow... I
This story is breath taking the detail is wonderful and I thought I understanded gaara to the fullest but I was wrong

Everything was perfect...timing...everything...and with Hinata accepting Gaara it was perfect...it couldn't be at a more appropriate time...my only fault is that u haven't updated in like forever...and I really love this story it is just wow...I am dying to see what's going to happened when he leaves and return back as the Kazekage...and they meet again...just so much suspense in me

wow this was so sweet!

You are a wonderful, wonderful writer! I.. can't begin to express my admiration for your work! You've brought out the best in this couple.. What can be more beautiful than first love, and more serene? I'm completely taken by sheer brilliance of this story, loved every bit of it, and the ending was unbelievably touching.

...Really now, I'm too emotional to comment on Gaara/Hinata romance. It was perfect to me period.

I especially LOVED Kankurou here! I've never seen him like this before, so alive, how do you do this? And Temari too, harsh and tender, I wish I had a sister like that)

THAT WAS SO FREAKIN AWESOME!

its not like the others, who just make gaara fall in love automaticaly,and the shukakus not there, and they live happily ever after!

this one was so much better and much more real, and gaara acts like he should around hinata in this one! like the gaara in the manga! you are the best author ive ever seen! (well, i havent actually never seen you but... you get my point!)

you should write books! your really good at it...super creative!

well i hope read to your other stories soon, bye!

WOW YOU SHOULD RITE A SEQUEL! -ak:P

"I am the angel of death, but the force of light. Unemotional. Serene.

I am what I am, and I am your doom.

I live for no one but myself. I fight for no one but myself.

I am Gaara. Fear me.

... only white eyes stay my hand..."

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I rly luvt that part! It got me wondering really. Gd story keep up the good work!

nice story please write more!