Intriguing origin story for Sentinels.

I felt very sorry for Victor. No Tok'ra in need of a host?

What happens with Colleen and Malek/Shan? What happens to Jim and Blair?

The relationship between Malek/Shan and Colleen is well done, and flows into and through the other storylines.

The Peru parts, Daniel Jackson, and Blair Sandburg are pushing all the right buttons.

Way awesome! I've been wondering when someone would do a Sentinel/SG1 crossover. Great work! I love how you showed Malek's mythical host (you know he's there, you just never see him, just the opposite of Aldwin). Thought the romance between Colleen and Malek was sweet! I loved how you had Tejete kidnap Blair! Sandy's as bad as Daniel; *always* in the middle of trouble, never safe, can't leave him alone for a second!

Loved it!

what a wonderfull fic i couldnt stop reading ! you write beautifully and your discriptions realy brought everything to life

wow, I'm impressed the ending is very fairytale-like (new word ;-P)

yet it still fits with the story and the character

Very, very good story, but are you really finished with it? What happened to Dr. Jensen? Will Daniel go talk to Ellison and explain about Oma? Or will Ellison seek him out to ask? You left a lot of things hanging here, I hope to see more to this story!

wow! this was awsome! please write a sequal or something!

~starcat

Wow. This is great. I hope you write more. I really enjoyed reading Mixed Signals.

Thanks for sharing

Hello there

Wow! It's a great story. I love it.

You are a very talented writer, and this story only proves my opinion :) You have managed to write a very realistic and fascinating fic.

I hope that you'll write more Stargate fanfics in the future, especially the fics about Malek's adventures on Earth.

Good luck

Julia

An interesting story so far. Lots of character development on Malek-Shan, and an adventure plot shaping up with some of the more familiar characters.