Reviews for Sarah's 18th birthday
hannahsheetz22 chapter 3 . 10/9/2018
in her ear not eat just for a future notice
Irina Hunter chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
So the Secret Passages book acts like the books in Morgan Le Fae's treehouse in the Magic Treehouse series.
OnceUponAnAubi chapter 39 . 4/3/2014
Cute!
Bloodsired chapter 39 . 2/9/2014
Great story!
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 39 . 11/23/2013
Pretty excellent story off to read The Masquerade.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 39 . 11/15/2013
Really good, story off to read The Masquerade.
Ebony Scarlett chapter 39 . 8/16/2013
Jareth is still a little too perfect but that's a minor fault. I actually really enjoyed this story. It worked out really well
Ebony Scarlett chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
Why is it that in every fiction they end up sleeping in the same bed? I don't get it!
Kensie.Beliebs chapter 39 . 6/7/2013
its awesome! but I hate that Jenna is a goblin :/
Lunasent chapter 20 . 5/17/2013
Tee Hee, Emma. That's my name! Woot! I know you didn't pick it but I still feel a little giddy.
Guest chapter 30 . 5/12/2013
"Yes of coarse it's me! Now will you get off and untie me?"
coarse means rough.
course is the word you need
Guest chapter 15 . 5/11/2013
"It stayed warm all the way down to the last bight." bight should be bite
Guest chapter 13 . 5/11/2013
"Winding her way threw corridors Sarah... " threw as in he threw the ball; you want the word through as in to go through
EmziBob chapter 39 . 11/4/2012
awesome story :)
lolgirl chapter 39 . 8/15/2012
DONE! I finished this in 2 days! Yay for me *does crazy dance* I have read so meany fan ficks (wait HOW MEANY EXACTlY DOES THAT MEAN?... I think I stoped counting around 20!)that I do not get impresed to esely... But This was particularly interesting... I loved it! Original idea, cool new carecters, and... you kept them in carecter prity well!*aplause* this was gerat

P. to Cassandra the evil!
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