You haven't updated since '04! C'mon, you gotta update! I really like this! TT-TT

great story,please update!

like it

are you planning on continuing this great story?

this chapter seems as if it was rushed. i mean, it has this fast paced feel to it. I'm sitting here wondering why the heck Hinata didnt close down kurenai's Tenketsu's? Hinata moved so fast that she grabed onto Kurenais' arm, can you explain why it looks like she disregarded all the hyuuga juuken fighting style? is she,(you), saving this up for when she gets slightly serious? "Fire Flare"? if you are going to place completely made up techniques in your story, please explain what they do at the End of the story.

. . .i see you havent updated this story since 2004...im gonna stop right here. you obviously arent writing this anymore. Laterz

~TankerMDK

im sorry to say that Masashi Kishimoto already created jutsu's that act in a similar way as the one's you "Created" you know about Tsunade so how exactly do you Not know about those jutsu's? you should alse read, "The Kakashi Gaiden", which is a Gaiden created to show how kakashi got his sharingan eye. that is, if you never did read the manga.

good story

i liked this please continue

Yay this is really god!

this is cool, can you tell me when the next one is going to be on?

hey, not in a mood to update it anymore? Anyway... this is a good story indeed though incomplete

great story! i luv the plot and everything and i can't wait till u update again which will hopefully b soon!

wow cant wait for another chapter

how about some 'meet the hyuuga's' for hinata ne? and akakshi/jiraiya/others meet naruto too?

please continue this story it's really good

AWESOME!