I love dark poems. Definitely love this one. I can't make positive poems at all, and if i tried they'd end up being really crappy and stuff...heh-heh...You're an awesome writer, keep it up! )

Oh, and keep writing!

.::ME::.

that was good. nice job!

great message

*sending you a hug*

yep, me too. ~.~

yes, it was good _

sorry i haven't reviewed for a little.

I like the ending the best, and the line, "Locking my in death's unbreakable embrace..." I also like the message that Death is not the path to take.

keep writing.

-DKR

I like it. I like dark poems. Mainly b/c I write lots of dark stuff. Lol. Ok, thats it. Plz keep writing ur poems!

I like it, its dark and spooky, No offence if you dont like the word "spooky" because I dont like the word either, but anyway, You like MCR? Cool! i like they're song I am Not Okay. Please write more... please?

*hugs to death... again* Please, please, don't do anything to yourself. *frowns* I wouldn't be able to live with myself if you got hurt! I know you can do this. I know that you can make it through this. And I know you will. You're heart is so strong. You can make it through this, Morph. This was an awesome poem. Keep it up. Love you.

Please stay safe for me.

Blood

For the love of Pete! Your poems don't suck. Why you're one of the best poet's I know, no lie. Please, update, and don't put yourself down like that.

one of your best, in my opinion. you should consider getting your poems published.

keep writing,

-DKR

Well, I've been nothing but lazy, so I didn't review the poem before this... Sorry, I'm WAY out of it recently. ((In case you couldn't tell... Damn, there I go, babbling away like some crazy person... Which I am, never mind.)) Very nice job on both, but they just cut so deep... *sigh* Try to keep your hopes up. *hug*

~Rae Rae

PS: I still love you more! I WIN, CASE CLOSED!

*hugs and doesn't let go until you hug me back- which will probably be never* I have faith that you'll find your hapiness. I know you will. Just like I said before, someday, everything will be alright. One day. Please don't do anything to yourself... I don't know what I'd do if you got hurt... or anything worse. This was a great poem, but, like I said before, it still burns. Keep it up. Love you.

Yes, if you're wondering, I was scared when I wrote that chapter too. ;

Blood

T-T *sniff* So sad! (hugs AP, and plants a little kiss on his forehead)