| Reviews for A Thin Veneer |
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  HolyKnight chapter 1 . 7/3/2004 Great, a bit rushed in the end of the chapter 2 but in general great... |
| alan fangor chapter 1 . 7/3/2004 where could I find Col crackpots original story so that i could read that to? plus good story i enjoy your works |
| jonnyG chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 Oh god you have to write more very soon, I have been waiting for a b-5 star trek original series crossover.. Please update soon. |
 andrewjameswilliams chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 Looks interesting Albert. I look forward to see where you are going with this. More soon please. |
| Richard chapter 15 . 11/27/2004 Wicked Chapter, got to wonder what the Vorlons are going to do? Or if they're going to slip some tech, information, or warnings to the Minbari to even things up a bit. Got to agree with you primarily using the t.v. and movies to base everything on. Trying to do that with the books could give someone a headache, considering how they don't mesh with each other and the shows too well. Also, got to imagine that the Shadows don't mind the situation all that much. Anyways, keep it going and can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Gyre chapter 15 . 11/27/2004 Minbari vs. angry Kingons. Selling tickets? It looks like the Minbari are going to get an infusion of Vorlon tech. Time for Kirk to get dangerous. |
| thecomputerroom chapter 15 . 11/27/2004 God that was good, when can we expect more.. |
