Aren't the Edain the "second born"? Anyway, This is sad! The twins should not be separated forever. Good story.

WAAHH! You made me cry *sniffle*

Ai Valar... *sniffles* I swear, this is one of most heartbreaking fics I have ever read. Very, very rarely do I come across a fic that has me in tears in not even a minute. I honestly didn't know what I was getting into when I clicked on this fic on the Mellon Chronicles Fanficion Awards page, but I found a beautifully written incredibly sad fic that is the first to have me in tears for a long time.

Now I need to reread it!

That was the saddest thing that I have ever read...! But it was so beautiful! Im sorry but I cryed when they were saying goodbye and were hugging each other. It was so cool when Elladan heard Elrohir say "I love you, my brother" I wonder why Elrohir didn't sail with Elladan to Valinor.

I liked how you added the poem in there also!

I liked the end when Elladan was thinking about how they use to play together when they were elflings!

I will definitely look for more of your work! :)

I think that might be the saddest thing I've ever read.

In a good way.

forgive me, i cried! that was so beautiful! i nearly drowned my self with tears! WAH! *sniff!* okay, i am fine, i think... that was GREAT! i loved it! i really liked the part where Elladan and Elrohir hugged each other and cried! it was so sad! but so good to! any way! great job on the story! if it were in i contest i have no doubt it would win first place! hands down! i have a story that is in need of a few reviews, it is called I'm Looking And Finding. thanks! again, fantastic job!

Yours till the Evenstar wanes,

Aranel Lissesul.

this was so sad! :( But really well written. :) good job!

So sad...I wonder why Elrohir decided not to go, I always feel as though the twins should be together...It must be a burden for him to stay and never to see him again...Poor Elladan how will he cope with his twin...

Nice job...

*bursts into tears* that was so sad!

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I loved this story. The last line can really choke a person up. Thank you for this beautiful story!

That was so well written, and it touched me in a way that most fics rarely do. A beautiful piece, thank you for writing it!

Oh... *Sobs hysterically.* That was so SAD! And so BEAUTIFUL. I normally never cry, but this was just so touching. Keep up the good work!

Omg, that is so depressing. It's not fair! Elladan come back or Elrohir go! Ah! But good story, u made me tear up. Gotta love twin stories...

*sniffles* Gods... I'm not used to crying like this. It was just so sad... too sad, almost... but so good... gods. *sniffles*

Damn you and this beautiful story! *cries*

~Koko~

That was so sad! I'm sobbing right now because of it! It was so pwerful! I almost never read fics like these, so this was just...WOAH! Great job, you're an awesome writer! I love this fic, it was absolutely touching! Someone, help me stop sobbing...

:'( T_T '(