This made me so happy you don't even know. Goood job!

It's all serious, & then your author's comment is all funny - it's kind of ironic. Well, for the record, I liked it. Just capatilize at the beginning of each quotation. :)

LanhuaxLady Bat. I've been looking for one of these. x3 I just found both of them really cool and decided they should be together. xD Very nicely written, and funny at the end..how pretty.

Good story. I never pictured Ranfa and Lady Bat together. lol! They make a really weird couple. and just to let you know, Lady Bat is a GUY! Yes, he looks like a girl, sounds like a girl, and dresses like one, but he is a guy. I always thought he was a girl too, but then I looked on wikipedia and it says he's a guy. I keep thinking he's probably a transie. XD! He does look like one. Anyway, good job!

I beleive the moral strongly. Whether lady bat is a girl/guy; the world may never know...

Wait...I don't get the ending...

Not really into MMP but it was kinda cute! I particularly like the end - made me laugh!

I guess a critism would be there's a lot of speech and not really much description or explaination of feelings in there, but if you're aiming for "short and sweet" that's not necessarily a bad thing.

Keep it up, MMP might not be the most popular thing around but people appreciate what you do! :-)