Hehe, i didn't expected to see Marco speaking spanish. I gotta warn you, as a spaniard, it had quite a "google translate" feeling to it. Would you like me to proofread it?

Absolutely amazing!

Fantastic story, wonderful characterisations and a great writing style. This is one of the best Animorphs stories I've ever seen!

I would beg and plead for an update, but considering this was updated, what, ten years ago? I think that has a slim chance...
But anyway, thank you for the fic, it was amazing and perfect.

Oh wow. This is really good. I demand you continue! XD

"I cannot believe this... my better friend is a fag! So that he did not say to me? what son of puta I do not understand so that he did not say to me! Jesus Christ Quiets your mouth, asshole desire not to listen to you" is what Marco actually says

why did you stop? it looks pretty good :(

Aw, Tobias is so cute. I really, really hope you deside to continue this story. It's so cute! I can't wait until I find out what happenes so please update!

update, update, update, please please please please please?

this is going to be a great story i can feel it

Wow, this story kicks ass! Its to bad you haven't updated in 3 years :'(

OKAY JAKE IS NOT GAY

*squee* I love this story! Though, I must say that the lack of Tobias and Ax talking is slighty OOC, since they are best friends O.o;. But I do love the story, I'm adding it to favs and putting it on alert so I can continue reading it!

I am guessing that you don't like Justin Timberlake, huh?

Such a shame that you stopped writing and updating...I guess not much people had been reading...wait, there's about 142 reviews so that's not it...Writer's block...for three or four years ... I don't think so...

So what's the hold up? Giving up?

(sighs) Such a pity. Oh, well, whatever you decide I support you. Even if it means you won't continue on with the fic. Thank you...I enjoyed reading your work. Could you do me a favour and send me some follow-ups of what's to come? Just cliff notes...It won't be the same but I'll be content with that.

This story will go into my favourite list...even if it is not complete. Again thank you for having the time to write such an exquisite story to fill my time...

For the position of a leader and a strategist Jake sure is a bit low in IQ points when coming to terms with mushy feelings...I could see him knocking to every brick wall on the way without so much as think of a better answer...

Lover? They haven't even go onto the next phase yet...

By the way...I haven't finish on bitching about Rachel yet...But I'm to lazy to comment on her abrasive and foolish reactions...so I'll let her off the hook...(chuckles)

Aww...that is so sweet. Though I don't believe any of it...real love...not exactly a believer...much less fast love...Though I like to read stuff like these...kinda need a reminder what I lack...

Rachel is so dramtic. I mean she was the one who cut him off...going for the jugular and all...

Puh-lease! She deserve every bit of that...(mutters the word 'bitch')

Go for Tobias. That's telling her!

A smooth read and I find the relaxing pace nice.

Interesting read so far. No complains here.

(chuckles) I first laugh on the part Jake thought Tobias was beautiful...and the part where he wondered where the hell that thought come from...

As a whole, I sympathize with Tobias...I mean he lost so much...compared to everybody else...maybe except for David (he practically won the most tragic figure award)...Then Rachel... bitch...just because he was attracted to the same sex too doesn't give her the right...I mean if anyone should be disgusted it's Tobias...she's practically a psycho but still altogether to be one...if she wasn't an animorph, she'll probably end up as a serial killer...

(pants and takes deep breaths)Sorry...I always rant and digress...not to mention my tendency to bitch about almost everything...