I think that Frances Granger is quickly becoming my favourite character. Ever. She's awesome, with a really cool first name.

I only have one little problem:

"Ron could now see the resemblance between Frances and Hermione. They were both blithering idiots at times. They were both very pompous."

Because... hey! (Although, I do admit, I like the idea of describing Hermione as a "blithering idiot")

And, OI! How is being Canadian like being American! WE'RE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT! For one, Canadians know the words "please" and "thank you." (I know, that was low, but I couldn't resist). Stupid Ron. I think me and Frances (that looks SO odd) both had the exact same urge to hit him.

But Frances does have quite the personality, and I love how Ron doesn't really know what to do about it. Heh. It's very funny. Actually, are you setting up a Ron/Frances pairing? Because, I gotta say, I wouldn't have too many issues with it. I mean, I'm SURE that Frances' first love is Harry and all, but Harry seems a little bit distracted at the moment.

I love how the Granger family is so big that they don't even know each other. Which... heh. Anyway. Hurry up and send me the next part. I can't wait to see what happens next.

"Harry and Hermione, hand in hand, headed down the corridor to the GreatHall while Ron trudged a few feet behind them. As Ron looked around, he

realized that HogWarts had turned into a fluffy, pink love house!"

Wow. That's too funny. How come I didn't catch that my first time around? A fluffy, pink love house! Hehe.

Aww, my poor Ronald. He has such insecurities and jealousy issues, doesn't he? Plus it can't be easy when your two best friends abandon you. Not that I didn't love the H/Hr parts because... well, I DID and I AM an H/Hr shipper, after all.

Loved the roses part, loved the fact that Harry was totally oblivious of Ron's mere prescence when Hermione was around. 'Cause... aww. *Goldy melts into a big pile of goo*

Have I begged you to continue yet?

Or told you recently how much I love and adore you?