aww. that was a really good story!

You've done it again. I've often wondered about Jack

's family (and Tony's because, yeah. Tony is my boy) and I think you've done a great job showing Jack's mother here. So sweet, and the last paragraph? *Aches*

Very lovely piece.

bloody brilliant!

it is so hard to write a good 24 fic but this is awesome! well done. Beautiful, loved the line "he'd been born to take responsibility for people's lives." Really really good

*cries* Perfect... just perfect.

~Aqua~