I know this Masterpiece hasn't been updated in a long while, but still, I shall be ever hopeful for the next chapter!

Seto and Shizuka forever!

I've seldom read such an angst fic. It struck me. I was completely into this story until finding it was not completed. You haven't updated for six years, but I see you're still publishing. I guess you're not inspired anymore, however that story has a lot of potential.

I like that side of Kaiba who is desperate to have his revenge. Usually people make him a hot-tempered man, but your Kaiba is, well... Different. Scary. Sadistic. Lonely.

It's a detail, still I liked the fact that Shizuka didn't cure her eyes. In every fic she sees very well, so it makes a difference. I had wanted to find that in a fic, and you're the first one.

I'm laughing when you say people are complaining because there isn't romance. I want to say they're stupid to wish for something like that. What do they want ? Kaiba to come and say : "Serenity, I apologize for scaring you. I love you, I don't want revenge anymore". AH AH. You're kidding me. This fic is outstanding and it HAS to stay the way it is, if you ever write it again (which I hope). Slow and discret romance is great when it is well done. And romance isn't always needed in a fic.

Sorry if there are things you do not understand, I haven't really practised my English these past months and it's late there. I hope you'll find somewhere the inspiration to continue this fic.

I love your story. Too bad you seemed to gave up writing it. You haven't updated for years.

keep writing this is good but could you plz let shizuka be stronger i don't know as in don't let people wlak over her

This is the best agnst Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction I've read yet... God dammit, Seto and Mokuba are evil little fuckers. But I hear that's what their like in the manga. What does (A/N 1) and so on mean. though? It it reference to the manga? IMPERFECT PARADISE...UPDATE...VERY SOON...OR ELSE... *cackles evilly*

Ah! Too bad you didn't continued that story, i liked it so much! T.T I was just going trough my list of fav stories when i ended up on this one...and like control by a mysterious force i click on it( XD ) It's so good!(Eh, just realized that i didn't let a review when i readed it like what, two years ago?) Well, now's my chance to tell you what i though of the last chapters(eh, better late than never!)

Very great! Even if it has been some times and your writting must have improved since, i really like your style. The irony and the comparaisons in your script is just too funny ( Sometimes reminds me of Eowyn Colfer (Artemis Fowl)(maybe you've readed?) ) It's just too bad, now, that most of the KaibaXShizuka stories are all the sames. Your's was really interesting and original because of the way you incorporated the manga in your story. The way you change it make it seems like it was the original!

Well good luck for your others fics!

*Sniff* That was the best disclaimer ever, hear the sarcasm? Well, this fic sure is different from the "usual" Seto kidnaps Shizuka fics, I like it. The horror and the anti-fluff is perfect. I'm starting to love Mokuba like this. I have only two mangas from Yu-Gi-Oh! and I can't buy the others. *burst into tears* Why won't they translate it? Oh yes, I'm also dying to watch the Japanese anime version. They sent us the crappy dubbed version with no good action at all. Why does my country always picks the wrong things? Oh well, I've rambled enough and I want to know what happens next. Keep it up withe the horror and the fabulous angst.

T.S.O.H

i like it but well you could just call seto ,hitler

cause he is this times hitler (in this story) to be putting it lightly.

sorry

but i do like it

so when does shizuka and seto start happening

I do agree with you. Kaiba and Mokuba are not OOC in the 'true' Yu-Gi-Oh Manga.

It's very cool to use that Kaiba instead of the one in the anime.

He is so cruel to Shizuka... and if cruel love blossoms it's really delicious.

Well...

Update soon!

Hm...I like how you are using Kaiba from the manga; it gives a whole different spin, I think, because we are so used to Kaiba being won over. I like him cold, but not so much evil (Have you read Lanse's "The Possession?" That's how I imagine Kaiba). But, one some level, I think the fic is almost too cruel (but then again, if it is a response to the manga, then what is the author saying?) I'm waiting to see how it all plays out.

I hope you update soon.

w0t! you finally update! you don't know how hard it took me to get through to this page. Don't Mokuba sound evil.

You have such wonderful imagery. This is an awesome fic and I absolutely LOVE the title. I was actually kinda worried for Shizuka in this chapter, and for Mokuba's sanity...lol Keep up the great work and update asap please!

Silver Fantasy

Great story! So when are you going to update? why did you make serenity blind? I really don't see the point! Is a relationship going to happen between seto and serenity? I really don't see it happening! I really like how you made mokuba really mean cause in all the other stories mokuba is always a sweet person. I really hope you are going update soon!

Cheers!

Good

... you used my 'disclaimer' well, I'm honored.

Wonderful chapter. Now, must ponder angst Kaiba brother fic with Kaiba repenting.