Freaking love this story! XD Such tension... it nearly killed my heart!

Cool story :D Poor leggy tho ;-;

Thanks for the story and I love you, hadir !

Holy crap with all the death it's like game of thrones, XD this was a amazing story I read it all in one night. You did a great job!

I find your plot quite clumsy and unrealistic.

Legolas finds that there is treason prepared and doesn't tell anyone about it. One tries to drown him but when stabbed, just leave with warning not to talk to anyone what happened.

You should build your plot more carefully - there is not suspension when the reader has to cringe teeth over the stupidity of the characters which behave as helpless, clueless babies, not the capable youths they are.

I give it a chance still as I hope it gets better later.

I've basically sat here and read this through for the past...oh, ten hours. I didn't cry until the end, but then you had me weeping for ten minutes straight. Thank you. Thank you so much.

Goodness gracious, fantastic story. Love the way you describe their feelings!

"He would cajole her, flatter her, pretend to be the wiser, older brother who she could trust, look up to. And then he would become the viper waiting for her to get just close enough for him to snap her up in his coils."
I realized why Ainan seems familiar- reminds me of my sisters ex who is still bothering us. His lies are poisonous- one minute he is saying he loves my sister and the next he threatens her. He even almost strangled her-one reason why she divorced him.
Anyway, chillingly excellent characterization. I know it's been a long time since this story was posted, but I found it on a community and am enjoying reading it.

This is one of THE BEST fanfictions I have ever read! Always twisting and winding, never knowing what to expect DESPITE the fact that it is like so many other stories already written about Legolas being abused by his uncle. This is original and I love it!

*SOBBING HORRIBLY*

And it only took my 3 hours. :) Great job! I hope you have a good life.

I absolutely love your stories! I discovered you on CoE about a week ago and since then I have sat down at my computer and read through all your stories! Now I'm being a good girl and coming back to review.

I love the way you Write Haldir, and you capture his friendship with Legolas brilliantly.

Hmmmmn... My favorite of your OCs is Perhaps Rameil... But I quite like Narvenian too... not quite sure why.

Agar Saer has the perfect combination of sadness, angst, suspense, and the odd hilariously funny part!

the whole way through, you can totally imagine being one of the characters.

Parts that stuck in my mind... oooh this could be long...

-When they find Caliven's body, and when Haldir finds Telas' body.

-When Legolas shows Haldir the spot behind the waterfall- I could totally imagine it!

-When Legolas finally tells Haldir about everything

-When Ainan and Thranduil fight, then Tindometir tries to kill Legolas and Haldir saves him

-The honey seed fight!

And lots more!

Thank you for an amazing read, I'm sure I will come back many times and re read your stories!

I'm almost feeling sorry for Ainan being left to the mercy of your other reviewers... oh well.

Namarie an si :)

I really was enjoying this story, but in time, it turned from abuse to torture and dead people... So I stopped enjoying it as much... But I will follow this story anyways, because I was actually enjoying it, and hopefully, one day, I'll be able to finish it. :)

Kristen

I really was enjoying this story, but in time, it turned from abuse to torture and dead people... So I stopped enjoying it as much... But I will follow this story anyways, because I was actually enjoying it, and hopefully, one day, I'll be able to finish it. :)

Kristen

*eagerly joins in*

Great story, I'll catch you later after I've helped kill him! Keep up the excellent work!

Eminnis