wow! that was absolutely beautiful! actually part of the reason i like it is that I can relate to this, the struggle with one's own emotions. anywho, you're a talented poet! could you review my poem "bleed" sometime, i'd love to know what you think!

Aishiteru, Ixi

thats original, and with the dark touch you give always to your poems.

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PoisonStar

u r very poetic! were do u get ur inspiration from? i hav a poem 4 u:

My parents r making me crazy

my parents r drivin me mad

im bonkers because ov mi mother

im losing it thanks 2 mi dad

i feel like im loosing mi marbles

if i go bananas 2da

then pleze giv this 2 mi parents

when the men in white coats take me away

told u im mad

*waves finger* LISTEN TO ME. QUIT PUTTING YOURSELF DOWN. I come across a really good story, or a really great poem of yours, and then I get this: It sucks. I don't care. Don't reveiw. It's bad. ECT. So what's up with that?

Ignore me, being sick makes me a bitch...

The poem is GOOD. I liked it.

Good. Very good. Hey, I read your profile, and we're ALOT alike. You are amuch better writer than I am, and I need a little help. E-mail me at .

Qouth the Raven, Nevermore.

it is not rubbish,and it does not suck.i thought it was wonderful,it definitely fits the put alot of different emotions into it. i love starfire would say 'you are a fabulous writer of the poems'. - -

That was really good. I feel the strength in it as though it were a power sucking me in. That was really, really good. Keep it up. Love you.

Cool, really cool, you captured her emotions very well. This poem was great,

keep on writing. _

good I liked corage remins me of my friend megan.

Very nice. I hope you continue to write wonderful poems like that. I'm sorry about the wait with my fic. I'l update ASAP.

how can you not care anymore!

*bewildered look*

oh no! you are suffering from depression adn low self esteem! i must save you!

courage friend! you must be strong! and write more fics so i can read them!

ok, aside from the crazy-ness that is me, you did great. seriously. i liked it. very much. perfect descriptions! Lol _