This didn't seem bad at all. Just a big lovers spat. Please write another!

Very good!

i loved

I find it impressive the way you are able to capture all this feelings with such an intensity! It is a wonderful story, full of angst! We can feel the tension in the room rise until it boiled! You're an amazing writer!
I really hope Kenshin won't let Kaoru down, again...

I think this was a wonderful moment of bonding because not only are the ones we love the people we turn to when we are in pain but are often the ones that hurt us the most simply because they can hurt us so much less effort then anyone else.

I've read this story in the past and loved it! I want you to continue your writing, because it's amazing! :) Good work !

i listened to eminem and rihanna's "love the way you lie" while reading this. It felt so in tune. )

I thought that I read all your R.K work but I guess I was wrong... Anyways the fic itself was ofcourse great, and I guess I'm off to checkout your other work

This is a little confusing, but I like how Kaoru is acting. I much prefer strong heroines to weak crybaby ones. Keep writing!

This is awefull! Great one-shot! Good work!

this reminds me of my own relationship. you really managed to capture the right emotions; good job!

beautiful dark angsty fic...

Loved the plot and the characterizations. Always a pleasure to read your work!2

Kya! This was dark and hot and sexy.

I read this a long time ago and I never reviewed. until now! i really like this one. i luv all the stories u wrote but this one has a more dark and possessive tone to it. you hardly ever find good ones like this. even if its just a oneshot, its one of my favs! just thought i'd tell u. D