This story was one of the best I have read.

Thinking of Harry’s early years breaks my heart and you have perfectly captured just why.

Jeez I've read this multiple times but it hits me hard every time. Just beautiful. Such talent!

Oh! So sad yet beautifully written. Pure and innocent minded young harry. Great job

This makes me want to cry... Good poem, although how you got it to rhyme is beyond me. Thanks!

i like it. but i disagree with harry. they didn't love him.

That is so sad, and sweet and lovelu in a weird sort of Angsty way. It jst makes me want to say 'AW, let's go rescue the boy'. So I'd say you did a good job writing. _

Wow! Great writing! I can't wait for more of your work...

Aw, it's so cute! Little Harry...excellent work, friend.

Oh, *ouch*. Felt that. Very *very* well done. A beautiful piece, and heartbreaking.

this is such a sadly real look into the mind of an abused child. Much better then i expected Good work

Oh gosh, he's so naiive, Harry...

I loved your story and your writing. So full of emotions...please do another one-shot! I would REALLY love to see some more works from you!

*I'm a fan*

-Chiki

ooh!

this is so sad!

but well written

two thumbs up

WAH! Can I come into the story and save him? He needs a huggle...

*sniff* That's just sad! I feel sorry for him! *sob* Poor little Harry! Anyways...

The poem itself is incredible, how you got such a story to rhyme! This really is a fantastic piece of work. :-) I love telling people how much I love their stories. But it gets harder and harder to do that, because most of today's Harry Potter stories are all SLASH and stuff, whether it's Sirius/Remus (disgusting!) or Harry/Draco (I'm sickened for life, though I can't remember where I heard of something so strange). This story now has its name of my favorites list! Yay!