Skirts the edge fairly closely towards the end. But it does so beautifully.

This could be turned into a very naughty multi-part story. Poor Harry.

This is really good. I hope you write more for it, it has alot of potential stories that could come off of it.

Interesting...

You really ought to continue this. You could have so much fun embarrassing Harry. Mebby the long horned pillicock WILL come again. Alorkin

I've only just recently considered this pairing and found it more popular than expected. I like it

Is there more than this one chapter for if end funny for me like there is last word I see is sister and it is from Tonks to Fred and his twian.

Wicked!...and of course excellent.

Mike.

Funny. Good story, compact and well written. You've got all the characters straight on. Just wish it was longer.

Great story. I think you should put up an adult version somewhere. noticed a few errors... if you want the list let me know.

thanks for the ride

HermioneGreen

I know that you said in the summary that this is only going to be a one-shot, however i think that what you've done here could be used as a great start for a story, be it a short one of a few chapters only, or the start of a longer story. Though even if you leave it as a one-shot, it's still very well written!

Cheers!

Dragon

Interesting story. Leaves a lot to the imagination, is this a one-shot?

Oh man, thats funny. Whatcha going to do have Hermione/Harry/Tonks/Harry/Ginny fic?

I like the use of puns and how Tonks is using Loony's words to turn people on.

That was great I truly hope you write more for this, its Brillant.

That was a wonderful ending for today. Nicely done.