| Reviews for Butterfly smiles and Bullet wings |
|---|
   Relina16 chapter 5 . 6/17/2015 R u ever going to update this story. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/20/2013 I love the story, but is that the ending or... if not *I would like to read what happens next |
| deathsangel666 chapter 5 . 11/23/2005 so is that the end? cause if not its been a while since you've updated. i'd like to see what happens. |
| kimberly544 chapter 5 . 8/30/2005 kool story plz update |
| 5265742755 chapter 1 . 3/16/2005 Please date soon. |
| SessGirlD chapter 5 . 1/31/2005 I've read all the chapters up until now and just wanted to say that they're fabulous! Please write more :) |
| Leanier chapter 1 . 12/25/2004 WoW! GREAT STORY!but i'm a little confused is this sess/kag or kag/inu?anyways...i wonder what will happen next! |
| fluffy's lil girl chapter 5 . 10/8/2004 o I liked the last part... HOPE U UPDATE SOON!~ |
| Ying Fa 92 chapter 5 . 9/25/2004 So good! I hope there won't be any lemons cuz I find they ruin really good stories, and this is a really good story is excellent and I wish you luck with the next chapter. |
| Scruffy Wolf chapter 5 . 9/15/2004 that was short |
| patriot-trojan chapter 4 . 9/12/2004 Oh I'd adore the next chapter, lady. keep doing your job, you go so far through out these, and trust me you'll make it boreing if you want it to be boreing. your paceing yourself, and going at the right speed, but if you need more help with coming for ideas, when you feel you lost them, take a break, go for a walk, ride your bike, and anaylize the people around you, and phrases that are use, and such. You're still in the learning process, and from the sight of you author list, one of them knows it well enough, and you could ask for help, on foriming more ideas when you can't come up for more. |
| patriot-trojan chapter 3 . 9/12/2004 seems your just typing and then going back to edit your story, very good for an online author. You make sure you write what the reader wants. Yet, you make it your own, by I guess experiences maybe? |
| patriot-trojan chapter 2 . 9/12/2004 you must update and let more readers read this, by good come back, and advice, I've noticed you can write more, but when their combacks are short, it's harder, and I guess that was your difficulty. But you're doing very well, keep going. I know this seems weird coming from a guy. But I like your story. |
| patriot-trojan chapter 1 . 9/12/2004 very impressed so far for your first chapter, the poetic signifigence really gets that deep conection with the soul. I like parts here and there that are impressive, but still need work on later till you get a higher vocabulary, which isn' hard, you can get them by reading and learn from them. Your doing well with just your first story. |
| Dagorwen of Beleriand chapter 4 . 9/8/2004 please update as soon as possible! |
