Great story you should have finished it.

I know this was written a long time ago, and sadly there are rare Alias fics and even rarer well written ones such as this. I realize that it's been four years (and 2 years since you've received your last review for this) but maybe if you see this you'll suddenly get the urge to write the next chp and tell the amazingly written story of what happens next! I'm rewatching season 3 right now and it got kinda old how they're still apart ( and I REALLY hate Lauren) so I decided to find a fic or two and here this one is with the added bonuses of being funny, well written, Syd/Vaughn, Lauren gone, happy with family story and I love it XD so even if you don't write anymore (especially considering it's been years and you've probably moved on to bigger and better things, but I thought I'd try anyways) I still love this story XD

omg i ove it please dont torture and not put the next chapter i am begging you to please update soon i love it its a really good story its in my favorites ttyl laterz

lollololololo omg this is too funny well chapter four is havent read the rest anya is so funny lol great chapter

Great Stuff! Please update soon!

no u can't have them killed!

LoL

wonder what's going to happen next!

LOVING THIS! more soon!

What...u cant just leave it as that who is this other person? is it sydneys sister...i recon it is...coz who else could it be? laurens isin jail... right well yeah please update soon...so far it sounds fantastic... tho i might recomend being a bit more detailed on what micheal and syd do...eg facial expression (dont think kinky)... And dont think im trying to insult u...coz ur storys fantastic...

ta muchly elfie xoxo

:D I'm loving this story mate! But the suspense, I hate it :o Who is this killer person?

Top stuff though, keep up the awesome work.

creepy...update please!

holy CRAP - can sydney inject Lauren personally? that would be fabulous

hey. i didnt realise i hadnt already reviewed even though i read this the first day it was 'published.' i couldnt think of a better word, unfortunately.

anyway, i feel kind of sorry for eric, truth be told. hiding secrets was never his best quality and against sydney, that would be even tougher.

hmm, who could it be? i have no idea who's following them.. im guessing sark or maybe even nadia and the person who's paying them could be anyone but the top four choices are lauren, nadia (again), irina and katya. i guess time will tell, though you do have me intrigued. that shocked me! i was expceting this to be all sweet and fluffy, not have them being followed.

great chapter. great writing. til next time.. gen* xxo

OMG...whos the killer? omg...dont tell me that Nadia is the hired killer by Irina/yelena/katya (whichever one of those derevkos) anyways...this is getting god! lol but they are def. gonna survive cuz they always do right? plez tell me they are gonna be alright srry i m just a lil hyper and crazy this afternoon lol good story plez do continue

That was a twist that I was not expecting, but it should make for an interesting story. I really liked this chapter, but I don't like how Syd has changed. I can understand it, but it will take a while to get used to. Great job, nad I love this story.

P.S- I'm sorry that your vacation didn't go well.

OMG i love this story! cant wait for more!

Great work. I havent review earlier cause i just started reading your story and i read it now. :) Keep up the good work and update soon.

I like your story cause it is sweet and funny!