Great story.

Please continue this story or create a sequel.

I love Mystique, but I never understood why Magneto didn't take her with him- she was still a friend, and sympathetic to his cause.

this a really good story you need to complete it

Great story, you tell her feelings and actions very well. And the best part is that I've only seen the first X-movie, but I'm getting sneak peeks from this!HAHAHAHA!(maniacal laughter.)

Great story so far, except that Magneto's hair is naturally white, not just from old age, so it would have been white when he was younger as well.

Piper

Hey, I just wanna say WOW. I mean holy shit! I just got done reading your story and I was beyond impressed. How the hell did you get so good? You are THE MOST talented person on the fricken site. Congradualtions.

please update soon!x!

well... What happens next? Uh dude, you've got to finish this! Its really good.

please update i want 2 know what you think happens next

please hurry up and update im dying here. its been months. oh Happy New Year.

cool chappy yay!

i dont understand the innuendo, but, despite what you said, im too curious for my own good. what did it mean?

when i read the chappter title "The Blind Mutant", i thought, "What? shes gonna bring in Destiny? Oh God, shes not gonna make Lesbian Mystique like comics". But i was wrong, it turned out to be Scott.

please note I have nothing against gays or lesbiands, I just dont like the Mystique/Irene pairing.

Hey TheSummoningDark,

so THATS what Pyro's face meant in that scene...i hope he gets screwed off in future movies, hjust out of spite.

Wonderful story. Goes directly to mi favs.

i like it