that was powerful as you read it you can feel the words and their meaning tingling inside you. it makes me want to cry cause it's so good just the way it's written and what it says it's MAGNIFICENT. im sure the person you wrote it for must have alot of meaning to you and would really appriciate it.

that was really i don't like rae&cy fics or poems butthis one was i think i can look past ya. rock on!

It's nice. Keep writing.

Too sweet and fluffy it BURNS please post again.

I don't know what I said, but I'm glad it made a difference. Thanks for the dedication. _

The poem is beautiful, deep, and all around in a conformably enjoyable style. Nice job.

~Raventhedarkgoddess