Poor Daine. Hasn't she been through enough already?

Oh no! What's happened?

Thanks Jon for telling us what we all know. But oops. At least Numair knows the truth now.

Damn. That's rough. Bad timing all around.

I mean.. she kinda deserved the mouse so

Of course poor Daine is gonna have to wait on them during that date.

Okay Numair, chill a bit. Poor Daine out here hustling and getting called out. Give the girl a break

It was well written!

Lovely story great job on the 50 chapters love the sweet relationship between the two characters great writing and plot!

"I've never heard you use that tone before." He said a little scared. There was a pause from her room.

"And hopefully you never will again."

xD xD xD xD xD

Well, call me crazy, but if I heard a crash from my bathroom, I'd kick the door down to see what was wrong.

...And then it turns out to be my brother knocking down the soap. xD *because that's happened to me before* But I didn't kick the door down. I just kicked it open.

Dang it, looks like I was beaten to the correction T.T

Actually, Ozorne's eyes are amber. X)

(Nerd moment...)

Great chapter, though I must point out that there is a difference between 'aloud' and 'allowed'.

Aloud is, like, saying something aloud. "There it is!" she accidentally cried aloud.

Allowed is, like, meaning that people allow it. "I suppose you're allowed to drive, but under three conditions. And you must be supervised at all times," he said sternly to his daughter.

...Shoot, I don't think I'm allowed to do that 'cause I'm not a beta...Too bad -.-

This was great! Lovely story!