Great story!

This is a GREAT story. I truly enjoyed it very much.

WOOOOOW! that was such a good story! i love it! cant find enough words to describe it! good job(:

Enjoyed this story over and over again

great end, i didn't even know it was up!

This is a great story. Really, I kept wanted to read it, and not stop halfway through

Great!

Rose

I read your story yesterday on gateworld. I'm glad you posted it here. Great job!

That was awesome.

Wow, just, wow. Brilliant stuff. I was actually worried you'd given up for awhile. I'm so glad you finished this, it was so sweet and moving and dramatic. I loved every word of it. Thanks!

I enjoyed the story. I wouldn't have minded a peek into the future of 'our' Jack and Sam and how their life is going. There hasn't been enough time (well, there was but 8 months would be cutting it awfully close!) to have their own Hannah but maybe 'our' Sam could have been giving 'our' Jack the same news her alternate was giving his alternate. Or something...

Not bad at all for a first story. Really quite good in fact. Hope to see more stories from you.

great work look out for it on my C2 i love it

I love it! But what about "our" Jack & Sam? ;-)

I strated reading this months ago glad you finished it. I would have liked to see a bit where Jack and Sam in our reality were remembering Hannahs birthday too, but were happy as Sam was also expecting a baby. Great story though nice long chapters.

good chap. good story.

Good story! :) Love to see Sam and Jack with kids.