Reviews for That Smell
Nemhain2009 chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
:-)
Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Aww, poor thing but at least something good came of it.
Shinigami Kiyomi chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
this is hilarious they are so cute
this is like the third time i read it... i cant believe i just noticed that i havent reviewed it the first time -.-'
Chereche chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
"Noooooo! It's too hot. I don't wanna. I washed last week. Lemme go! "

"Duo, I'm washing down as far as possible, then I'm washing up as far as possible, then you're washing possible yourself. Ok?"

Best lines ever. After all these years I still find them ridiculously funny.

Your ending was expected but nevertheless humorous. After all that trouble getting him to bathe, he refuses to come out.

Good job.
loretta537 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
this was a great story
Azamiko chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Cute.
Blackrosebunny chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Cute! Very Cute! Well the ending at least. Poor Duo... I'd die with out my showers . Anyways I really liked this .
Convexbaka chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
a merman - so cute
Shinigami's-Girl chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I'm going around reading old GW stories so I read this one. Aw, it was cute. Yay for baths. They rock. XD
Lydia chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
A cast iron monstrosity of a tub with clawed feet huh? Sounds familliar. ;D

That was an excellent story. I could tell you didn't proof it first, but all it was was some spelling mistakes. Kudos!
ssilverfoxx chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Very very cute! _
anime goddess chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
wow...werid u had a lot of spelling mistakes and yea ...werid
Finn Everlast chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
nice story