THIS IS A GREAT STORY! THANK YOU!

This story is fantastic. I love, love, love your poems by the way!

Completed long ago, but still loved. Your poems are great as well. Thanks for the story!

Haha, that's great.

Great story!

I just thought that you would give the wedding scene.

Wonder who will be fit more to use the gown. (Evil grin)

Just kidding, great job!

(laugh to death) this one is great.

I was amazed that Kosuke could notice Dark when Emiko didn't.

Nice story, I will continue my reading then~

hi this is a cool story please wright the seaquil soon i want to know about the darkness once again great story

I like your story so far, though Im finding it a little hard to imagine Daisuke as a 10-yr old... nice plot though, and I like how you put conversation belonging to the Masters group in italics. Makes it so much clearer.

I just wanted to review now to comment on your pen-name. Its firecold huh. Mine is firewolf in Finnish I originally tried to go for "ice-Pheonix" but it didn't really work out that well. I never thought about combining the contradiction though...nice touch

it was good, but didn't dai have the darkness stuff spread through him? cuz he was raped right? or did i miss-read that part?

whathappened to your? sequal i mean one minute its there and the next it's not are you revising or have you given up on it? please email your reply to

Aww, poor Daisuke has leukemia? Shucks..

Anyway, this chapter was very interesting!

I loved it! I can't wait to ready the sequal!

Aw! I love it, so cute!

*cuddles Dai* HE'S JUST TO CUTE FOR HIS OWN GOOD HERE!

I love your style. You introduce an event, leave us hanging, and then go back and explain how it happened, like when Satoshi, Dark, and Krad were kidnapping Daisuke. It honestly confused me at first, but then I got used to it, and that just added to the overall wonder of the story. I also liked how you italicized the demon's talking in the beginning. It helped add a mysterious effect, especially how those parts were purely dialog.

Excellent story! *goes to see if you've written the sequel yet*

~Topazled Hannah-Kun

WHERE IS FORGETFUL DARKNESS? Why did you delete it? ~sniffle~ please e-mail me if you didn't, or even if you did... I want to reread it!

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PLEASE, PLEASE!

This is an intersting twist to the NDAngel characters. I'm sad to see it hasn't updated in so long, now I'll just have to imagine how it ends. Good job with the chapters you have. _

This was amazing! Is there going to be a sequel?