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I cried. I don't know wether it was when harry died or on the line mentioning harry came to know his dad 17 years late, but cry I did. The only thing out of place was the word awesome in the last sentence, as the mood was angsty and... It just didn't belong there

What a heart touching story

I was actually crying at the end of this. This was a really heart breaking story. It seemed really possible, if I'm honest. However, I kind of feel like the use of the word "awesome" took a bit of the serious mood away. It might have been better to use a different word that meant something similar. Still, it's a really great story. Keep writing!

Dude, you're a very bad person!
I am here in tears! You broke my heart.
Beautiful.

3 I think Severus would have been a great dad to Harry. I just legit cried and my mum asked "Why are you crying?" I didn't answer but she read this herself and almost started crying. Oh my gosh that was amazing. -cries- :.(

aah. i couldnt stop the tears. the feeeeeels. why must uu.. :((

so sad. But good. I'm sitting here crying.

Wow. I am so depressed right now.

No matter how many times i read this one shot i cannot help but nearly cry funny that isnt it? ah well never mind it is an amazing story

aw so sad, but so good

it was a good story thank you

this is the first fic, ever that has made me cry.

u r a great writer.

Damned, you are good... of course now I am so sad that I will probab;y need professional help. Thanks

So sad. And beautifully written.