Story was to short but enjoyable none the less.

Short chapter not much emotion going on.

Like the chapter, just adding to the count.

Story is good so far.

Depressing story so I didn't give it a review.

I actually like the ending to this one. Yes the peacekeepers are bastards but the Scarrens are by far worse.

man i hope you do sequal to this i just need to know what happens next .

interesting . wonder if there would have been a cat fight .

Another fun fic. I like your writing quite a bit.

interseting change od events. ah, you need a sequel, i wonder howthose of earth would react to having peacekeepers in the vicinity. i know i would trust scorpius over so many. well, i do hope that sequel does come because showing how things change between criton and the rest would definately by something to see. thanks.

cop out major copout! you could of gone so far with this story! hopefully you dont do this with your other stories!

Didn't see it, but I belive it! Good fic.

Was waiting for the conclusion and nice twist at the end could make for a very interesting sequel if you go down that path.

This story is shaping up really nicely. I like how you combine the "cannon" with your AU and make the "cannon" all that much more believeable. I am enjoying this very much. Now you have to solve the problem of Lakkah, John, Aeryn, and potential danger to the child. This is going to hurt.

Interesting AU. Your take on what would happen is both reassuring and a bit disconcerting.