that was great i hope u can keep this story going

i wouldn't continue reading this fic. i'm sorry but i don't like the pairing. though they haven't got together, but it's still obvious that it's going to be narusaku. i hate this pairing, the same goes with sasusaku. i hate any pairing that has sakura with it. i just hate sakura ALOT.

besides the pairing, everything's fine. i like your plot, the way you write, but definitely not the pairing. and sasuke with tenten? god! i don't even want to go into it.

This is a great fic. Please think about finishing it as I would love to read more.

I thought Naruto had a mask on, how was he able to bite into the kunais?

nice story, a bit sappy about the whole "i love this village" thing, but i still really like it nonetheless. UPDATE SOON!

Good chapter.

Glad to see this updated. Spelling and grammar decent, though an elder brother [or brother-like person] is referred to as onii-san. Oni is an ogre/demon.

Damn. Just found your story and I have to say I'm rather addicted. Definitely keep it going. You have a very solid writing style and very few errors. Only thing I'd say to improve is the rhythm but I haven't figured out how to do that with my own work so I can't begin to help with yours. Keep up the great work.

what a wonderful story. What I like most about it is how the story flows, its like reading a well composed poem, if you get what I mean. Your writing style makes the story bueatiful.

glad u updated

good chapter

update soon!

update soon! it's a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Mery Christmas!

Update more please! I beg you!

You do realise that "Itai" means "ouch" in Japanese right? )

Great chapter plz update soon.

Good chapter