I know this was suppose to be short but please make another chapter or somthing like this with a few more chapters! Please!

Sweet fic!

Cute bonding :)

I loved that story. You should do more like it. It definately was a sweet moment between Logan and X-23.

Sooo Cute!

Aaaaaaaawwwwwwww... Logan acting all fatherly beyond being overprotective. How cute and sweet!

oh so cute

would you care to make a sequel?

(although this story is like... 6 years old?)

aw this was cute! 3

Very good, and cute! You should write a longer one, if you havent already...oh my, author of 733 stories...My!

As someone who has worked in high risk environments with their actual parent, yep, I know this story. We all go through the phase were we think the old man doesn't know jack; and 25 years later, you'll realize that as the old man, you don't know everything.

I think you've captured the evo-verse version of them quiet well here.

Logan as a daddy is just beyond precious. An akward daddy, but precious nonetheless! Such a cute, messed up little relationship...

I liked both of them. Wolverine trying to play father, and X23 trying to ajust in the Institute. Double-check on the securitu is very in character too.

Very cute. The line "No this is acceptable." just made me crack up. Nice work!

ahaha that's cute. i love the last line "you're definately mine" that was funny. X23 was always one of the cooler cameos on the show. Sweet story. I love your work. keep it up.

That was incredibly sweet! I loved the whole thing. You should consider turning that into an actual series or something, that would be a lot of fun.

You did a great job with her personality, and the way she talked. I'm kind of sick of seeing most every other author write her as this crazy, always angry person. I like seeing her like this.

And 'Daddy Logan' is ALWAYS a ton of fun.

All in all, great work.

Totally loved it.