Hey,
I readed this fic something like a year ago, without letting review (I'm not very good in English, what may explain, but I should have). But I liked it so much that I translated it in French. And I refound it today.
I admire a lot the way you're writing (specificly this amazing moment outside and the describtions throught Dean's artistical eyes), and the very cute and light storie (you found a very good balance between the 2 stories what makes the reader passing throught a lot of differents emotions). So I wanted to thank you for it, and to ask you if you'd allow me to publish a translation in French (I haven't found any one ?)
Whatever, thanks and keep it up.

Wow! Superbly well-written; really enjoyed this fic and the Deamus dynamic here, as well as the buildup to the kiss. Parvati was a wonderful touch, and if this were longer I'd like to see her as a larger character. Ron's betting was properly hilarious, and them betting on Seamus's sexuality... I enjoyed having Ron not be a completely oblivious lout as he's usually portrayed-this sharper, more observant character fits better with how I see him. Great job!

This has to be my favorite deamus fanfic. Every time I read deamus I come back to this one first.

'"Seamus."

"Aye?"

"Do you 'like' Lavender?"

"Nope."

"Ok."'

'"I bet that Snape and Sinistra are snogging!"

"EW! Ron! Nobody wants to think about that, let alone BET on it!"'

' Dean was a jerk. A big, bloody Jerk. Stupid Dean-I'm-A-Jerk-Thomas. Jerky McJerkyson'

''The possibility of a lamer ending to a sentence-', Dean mused, '-was non-existent' '

'It was quiet possible that Dean would never meet a person who had a more … colourful vocabulary than Seamus, though he would only show it when he was angry. Or surprised. Or excited.

Ok. He showed it a lot.'

'Click.

GASP!

SLAM.

"Oh my GOD!"'

Damn, this is hilarious, cute and amazingly written all at the same time. , do more Deamus one-shots (or stories, thinking about it) like this! I'm BEGGING you!

Oh man! I'm reading this in class (bad girl, I know!) but I had to hold in all my fangirl flails. This was perfect! I so enjoyed reading this!

Super funny and sweet. Boys are so hopeless. But so, so adorable. :)

Fantastic writing :) You portrayed the characters quite well and I liked sarcastic Neville. As for Seamus/Dean... Adorable. Enough said.

-AYN

Oh Dean, you oblivious Gryffindor! I love that kid so much! The letters were Priceless!

So I heard of your fics through Zienna. So props to her!

I adored this. :)

aw! *jumoing on my seat* this was amazingly impressing beautiful and light. yum, I loved that! and i ADORE the last sentence! tehe...

HQJ

This was very nice! I almost felt a little bad for Lav and Parvati, though. The betting premise was very cute.

amazing fic, of course, but are you aware that the entire thing is underlined and italicized?

juz wondering...wat did they bet on?

Just recently became a fan of this pair and I just love your story! I had to add it to my favs so I'll be able to read it again!

Ack!

I loved this. I love the idea of Ron betting on people like this- makes sense. Anyhow. I loved your characterizations of things, and Pavarti's incessant inquiries leading up to the revelation. Great story.