FINNISH! Please!

Dear marauderyears,

I just finished reading your story and it is so good! I really like the plot; I would have never thought of an idea like that myself. Please keep writing, I know at least one person out there is listening:).

I really like the colour green and I think it would really suit Lily. And really, I think it was a good choice to make her wear Christmas colours considering what time of year it is (for them at least).

Okay onto some constructive critisicm and suggestions. Please don't make them fight. It's really not very nice to read about your favourite characters and then on the last chapter they get mad at each other.I'm pretty sure that people don't come to read other people's stories just so that they can read about arguments. So sorry if I rubbed that in your face but seriously it's the truth. Next whatever you do please don't make them have sex. It would really spoil the beautiful story you have written (and I really don't want to read it) so please don't.
Okay next thing umm... ohh don't even think of putting Henry and Lily together even if was only temporary because that would be absolutely disgusting. And could you please get James and Lily together quickly because they are such a lovely pair.

Anyway, keep writing.

Thanks,
Emily

You haven't been on fanfiction for a few years now and I dont kno if u will ever even read this review but please come back and finish this story! You can't leave us with just that! For me?

Wow!I love your story! It's so creative and original. This truly is one of the best James/Lily stories I've read. Please update soon!

Of all the places where you could have abandoned the fic, did it have to where Lily was crying and they had just had a fight? Was that really necessary? And what happened to "I know exactly how this fic will end?" You're updating deficiency aside, it's a very good fic. I found it funny in some parts and very cute in others. I though it was very creative how you solved the pressing problems.

hey can u pls put the next chap? it's awesome

Aww . . . poor Lily. She seems like a cry baby though. I never thought her to be; I always pictured Lily as such a strong women. After all she did die for her son. But, that is just my opinion and I think that regardless this is fabulous. THANKS! Update soon! :)

good plz add more

love it! cant wait for next chappie!

This is so good please keep going.

The chappie was written fine, and with no errors.

Its always good knowing where your going to take a story so just keep going.

Awesome story! Please update!

OMG !

please keep writing. its fantastic x

Hello again! If you think you lost me, nope! I'm back to give my lecture on how I love your story to the point of throwing mtself off a cliff for. Now, Brace yourself... :)

Please in the name of Dasher's dominos, Prancer's presents, Donder's duck, Vixen's valentines, Comet's carrots, cupid's cat, Dancer's drawings, Blitzens balls, and Rudolphs randiness update. By the way Merry Christmas early. hehehe...

Okay so update this story before I fall into a pit and get lost forever without knowing the end!

;)

~Darla~

Dear author,

I would firstly like to say I love your work! I'm sure with all the reviews you get even now after two years, the fans love you as well. You are a favorite of many. With only 13 chapters you riled up Where are you now? I'm sure every lily and James fan wants to know! I don't know what has happened to make you leave us and the network, but I guarentee your missed. Some still review to this story wondering when you'll write. I'm hell bent to making you come back! I have made many continue writing and I'm going to definitely work my charm on you! So wherever you are check you email and see how many people want you back! You siad you know how it will end and that's it coming to its close, well then close it. End the story that people have been taking their ideas from. I've seen these invisibal handcuffs in quite a lot of stories now. So please finish this story, or I will be fortced to take action and write everday until I'm answered. The last HP book was out a few monthes ago, I would habe thought that would inspire you to continue. Something must inspire you so I guess it will be me. I know you probably busy, but many of us our. I do vollunteer work, a job, school, and babysitting, and I still have time. Please author of this story, come back to fanfiction and continue with your great story. If not be prepared, I don't let up easy. Thanks, and hope to see an update from you soon! :)

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