Wow! Amazing! I've just read this entire story in under 24 hours and have absolutely no regrets about staying up half the night to finish it :) Remus and Tonks have always had a very special place in my heart, and the last two chapters had me balling my eyes out :( It is so unfair that they had to die, I can't think of two people who deserved happiness more than them. Such a great read, well done on the amazing writing! Xx

Fantastic ending- until Teddy abd James Jnr become animagus in secret and chew Harry's favourite shoes!

Wow, is this ever boring! In 3 chapters all that happens is a shopping trip, intro of an OC I already can't stand, and moping. That's 10 percent of the story! It's so SLOW. Skip!

This was So Good!

This felt like a full on relationship to me, from start to finish. The whirlwind, uncertainty when you're first going out, first lies, establishing each other, to the the finale. Nothing was rushed and you firmly created your own mark (I feel) onto this universe.

Thank you. This was exactly what I needed. I've given up and this had helped me get back up.

you should have gone with a different plot than rehashing Canon. the Deathly Hallows has so many plot holes and lacks basic common sense. it always pissed me off how Harry does nothing but act like a good little cultist, believing in Dumbledore and the prophecy and the inevitability of sacrificing himself despite there being no logical reason to. If Wizarding Britain couldn't get off its ass and save itself, Harry should have just let it burn. oh, and going about horcrux hunting by wandering around in the woods and camping in a tent? Completely stupid.

Dumbledore is trying his best to indoctrinate Harry into the cult of The Wizarding World, and Harry himself is a condescending, bigoted, controlling douche bag. Kitty needs to kick him to the curb and find a decent guy.

Wonderful story and one of the most unique and original HP fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. Well done!

there wasn't anything to tell her? Is Harry really this fucking stupid? She wanted to know why he wanted to leave his relatives house so badly, just tell her they hated your parents and they hate you, they make you do all the chores and treat you like garbage. and since you weren't willing to tell her these things, you clearly don't trust that she will understand and accept your reasoning. So no, you don't trust her. fucking idiot.

Loved it!

Some people will love this
Some will hate it
I’ve felt both
But it’s been a long time since a story made me feel like this one did.
Keep me captured as this one did.
Make me fall for the characters, even as the flaws are what’s important. So thank you for writing this, and to anyone who wants to read it, I can think of few better stories in this world.

Thank you for writing this masterpiece! It is truly a work of art. I cant express how you managed to bring all your characters to life and portray them in such a manner, just tyanks for the amazing read

Your Harry and Kitty dither and blather on with tons of nonsense, much of which Harry later retracts, for 16 consecutive , interminable chapters, only to weakly surrender in unit 17 of a 34 unit narrative. I'm not at all sure reading this to the conclusion will be worthwhile, especially as neither Harry nor Kitty has shown even a smattering of enlightened self-interest , despite obvious warning signs that capture by either of the dark forces, Dumbells' or Riddle's, was overdue. Pacing is even slower than an American soap opera, and the plotting is nowhere near the high standards of a Latin American telenovella.

Soooo this girl is a crazy stalker... and Order of the Phoenix is a joke. I wish you would put a 'parody' or 'crack' warning at the beginning of the story so I wouldn't waste my time with 3 chapters

15 years in the making and this story completely blew me away. I am so happy I came across this. Honestly, this might be my favorite fanfic story of all time. The world you created with Harry and Kitty was incredible and the emotions that you drew not only in the characters but also in the readers was incredible. You truly have a gift for writing and wish you the best in your future endeavoures. Thank you again for writing this masterpiece of a story.

So you did the impossible, you made me actually care- truly care- about your OC. Kitty was my favorite character throughout the entire story, and I rooted for her every minute of it.
I clicked on this because I was looking for a Harry/Tonks- I staid because this was the best Harry/OC I’ve ever read.
You have the talent- do something with it. When you publish, tell us all!