I hope you take my comments critically and not personally as that is how they are meant. I was disappointed with the flow of the first chapter, it didn’t come together very well I’m afraid. Bollocks is the correct spelling not bullocks as a Brit myself that’s a bit of a pet peeve, wrong spelled slang. Buffy and whistlers interactions are very poor, it’s all over the place it doesn’t flow, thinking Buffy is to complicated a name for middle earth? Because aeomer, Boromir, meriadoc, theodren these are all simple names? It was a poor execution. You want to write a Buffy crossover but change Buffy a name? Just write an original story if that’s the case

Wow! I loved all of this. I love, love that this is more book than movie, and that the characters are still the characters in their essentials. The main pairing was so well written, sparks were flying off the page!

This is a really amazing story and your writing is really articulate.

Loved reading this story even when some things seems strange me I still loved reading this story.
One thing I didn't understand why you wrote Buffy as such a bitch. She is really not a nice person. She would never treat persons the way you wrote it. The only person she bitched around was Spike but just him not some random people or ones she considers friends and if she did she did because there was a good reason.

Why would she forget to invite the hobbits and why would she ask Eomer if he did invite them. She would never forget people she cares for and would never be so rude to question Eomer about it when she knows there is a possibility that others can overhear the conversation.
And the food for her wedding. I don't think Buffy would let them poison her she would kick there asses and if not Buffy Eomer would do it.

But aside from all this. I still loved reading it. Twice already.

So in the end it wasn't bad. Your writing skills are at least pretty good. Your tendency to torture your characters just to generate angst, however, leaves much to be desired. Angst is not drama. Torturing your characters is not good writing.

My question is, why are you portraying Buffy as a bristly easily offended bitch who gets upset at things said when there is no insult intended? Seriously, if I were Eomer, I'd have given up on being polite to Buffy, what with her intentionally assuming insult in the most innocuous of statements.

To put it bluntly, she's not worth the time, the way you're using her.

I hope for Buffy / Éowyn, but i fear it shall be Buffy / Eomér. Ah well, can't be perfect i suppose ;)

Im liking the Buffy / Éowyn subtext :D

I enjoyed very much.
-t

What anutterly fantastic story! BRAVO!

I thoroughly enjoyed the you and Katrina did an excellent job with writing detail was awesome, the plot realistic and the characterization spot on.i was sad to see the end of it because it was such a fantastic it lots, doll(s).

I have just spent hours reading this story. Absolutely wonderful! What a journey. Thank you so very much for sharing your talent with us. This was beyond fantastic... And complete!

amazing, wonderful, epic story. love the buffy/eomer pairing! great job!

i love it

I love this story the pairing with Éomer i would never have guess they would fit but you made it work ! hope there is a part 2