I only know that they call them paya or gods and that cetanu or the black hunter is their god of death and hunt. And they have another that I don’t remember the name of that is the goddess of healing n stuff she is the life mate or wife of cetanu and that their gods are also very old very strong hunters and ancestors. Hopefully this helps somebody

I really enjoyed in this story. I hope for continuation of it :)

Another piece of crap.

Boring as fuck

You have a gift of making the reader care for characters in your stories. :-)

This was your first fan fiction? Damn! I loved it & i don't usually don't read pred story, but i felt attracted to this one & i am glad i read it. I hope you make a sequel.

This was so fantastic! I totally saw what the commander was up to T_T I swear some people...
Oh, but you should have put a small piece on what the expression of the slave master was like :) that would have been hilarious! :D

This is a very nice story:)

First of all... YES! There ARE readers who go through the archived stories to find that rare gem which turns out to be a truly worthwhile reading experience!

This story, was indeed such an experience. The plotline and story basis was one that I have not previously encountered on this site, and while there are some minor spelling errors, I attribute those to the peksy and persistant gremlins that invariably plague a work of excellence as it is being uploaded. This story, was truly exceptional, and was a true pleasure to read.

Please, I am humbly asking that you write a sequel to this.

Sincere regards,

Khalthar

This has been a most interesting story. Well written and only a few spelling errors that I can't even remember now. A good ending. Able to move to a sequel, or just leave it as is.

This was extremely good! It made me sad that they had to part (teary eyed), "parting is such sweet sorrow". :D The Yautja culture was very different from the any others I'd read. I never read of any that kept slaves like this. It was interesting to read and a cool change! :D

POASO

ello GW

I prefer to write an over all review of a piece having tasted the fullness of it rather than try to pik apart another's thoughts a few paragraphs at a time. I hope this is ok.

Probably the only time I see your writing encountering any difficulty is when grammar comes into play for you, your creative style is simply amazing, you have really good grasps of the motivation for your characters and what is the drive behind them and how they see their place in the world they r in. I Do see you having some minor word usage difficulty and it is often portrayed as you not being a primary english speaker , however being from canada you may be primary french speaking so that may also explain that issue. I do wish you would keep writing you have a wonderful style that is simply a joy to read.

Keep up the good work GW

J

This was an amazing series. The length did deter me at first, but I stuck through to read it all. The detail you have in this is very good. The emotions the characters expressed are very clear. And the ending to the story was saddening in a good way. Keep up the good work :)

Good chapter and there is nothing wrong using Celcius

ha ha ha! She screwed like blues clued!