So, I haven't had anything to do with Kim Possible in about two years, so it feels kind of wierd to be reading a fan fic about it. However, this was recommended by a friend and I'm SOOOOOO glad I read it! This was awesome. I loved the style of writing, and the plot. You did an excellent job here!

I've been following Comiz-INC's "graphic novel", and since it looks like it's going to be a while before he finishes, I figured that I might as well read what inspired it.

What DID happen to Shego and Drakken?

fuck fuck fuck story and hate if shego is dead this story fuck

nice

cool

This semi-downer ending was certainly surprising. O_o Certainly didn't see such a jump coming. Personally, I think it's a bit too random - the Shego earlier in your story didn't seem to fit into a rule-the-world mold (destroy it, yes, rule it, no; she'd probably find administration too boring).

I don't know what it is, but "Vanessa" seems to be a popular evil-girl name. I just recently used it to mask Shego's identity in a short story I submitted to my school's literary magazine.

Drakken’s cheeks turned pink. “Let’s just say Pego’s not machine washable,” he mumbled. “But never mind that!..."

Best line of the story! XD

“Okay, first he’s dead, and now he’s a fish!” Ron said. “Make up your mind!”

Best Ron line of the story. XD You're very good at channeling his character!

Slight critique - try using pronouns more; including the character's name after each time they speak (unless there are multiple characters) becomes repetitive.

When I stumbled across this fanfic years ago, you'd only gotten to ch. 6. Since I was a bit younger and this was one of the first fanfics, KP or otherwise, I'd ever read, the seeming finale scared the pants off me... Just ending it in a cliffhanger was haunting. Now, of course, I realize haunting creepy cool, and you've finished it, but that "OMG It just ends?" feeling sticks with me.

I remember reading this when I first discovered KP fanfiction back in 2006... finally found this again! I'd run out of fanfic at Ch. 6, so it's cool to see you've finished it up. Back to reading!

~F'C'7

Perfect ending. Humor and mystery.

Great action sequence and a hilarious ending. The last moment help was priceless.

And so the awful truth dawns on out heroines.

Can Sunny be stopped? Or love, for that matter? Can't wait to see.

This was one of the two ways I thought you might go, and you did it with great flair. Ron and Shego steal the show. And the villain is just perfect!

Knew that would happen, but it was well done and I like how the newly formed Team What The... took very different roads to get here. Great Ron here.