I know it's been a long...very long... Time since you last updated this story. It's probably wishful thinking, but I hope nor day you decided to continue. The story is compelling, your character development fantastic, and I find myself completely sucked in.

wonderful

in my opinion this is one of the best star ocean fanfics i have ever read. you are talented. please continue to write wonderful story's like this.

This story had really set the bar for perfect writing and plot. Even if it were to be just one more short chapter, an update would literally make my life (and no doubt many more.) Fingers crossed.

Please come back to life! I love this story and your such a good auther, we need you!

i really wish you would finish the story, its hands down the best Star Oceans story on the site, and your a really good aurther.

Please continue. (:

damn, cant you realize that you have hundreds of people wanting you to continue, even for just one more chapter? i know life is tough, but come on, kid! you have talent, so feed the hungry!

I read this narrative about two years ago and have returned to it for a couple of annual re-reads. It's by far my favorite Star Ocean fan fiction. In fact, it's one of my favorite fan fictions in general and probably has consumed more of my time than it should have. ;)

I know you probably won't finish, but I commend your work thus far and your characterization of Albel and Nel. Your transitions from dialogue to exposition are likewise extremely well executed.

I just wanted to say that if you're ever bored or feeling nostalgic, think of your adoring fans and finish this story!

I just though that I'd do this since I haven't logged in for the longest time.

I absolutely adore this story. It's been years since the last update, but I can't help but hope for more. Your characterization of both Albel and Nel matches up with my headcanon so well it almost is scary. This has really set my standards when it comes to readin fanfiction. In some odd way, they compliment eachother the way Booth and Brennan do. It's been a couple years since the last update and you probably have lost a little to all interest in the game, but if you ever have the drive or motivation to finish this story, the I most likely pee myself in excitement like those little dogs. /tehe

Thanks for the great read though. 8D

fascinating story! albel's and nel's emotions come out very well. the description is very good as well. I really really like this fic! I'd love to know more, specially what happens to albel and nel now that they're separated. I hope you'll update this fic despite it being a couple years since the last update.

Hell!

Why there is no followind!

What I will become!

rha... :'(

I hesitated to immediately read this text because of its length...I had to initiate direct!

huhu very scary... love it!

freaky part '