HG2 HH2HGGGH2G22HG LOL I'M SORRY could not help my self

I must say one of your pairing are really worpping my mind and is stretching me to the limits of what I can handle but I guess what good is reading if you never plan on widding your Horizon

hey slytherin is a great house im in slytherin. i agree that every house is just as awesome as it can be so slytherin is no different. gryffindor is brave and daring, useful in adventures and even in business when u takes risks. hufflpuff is awesome bc it's a house of friendly and loyalty, everyone would want a friend like that. ravenclaw is very smart and wise. everyone would want a friend who can gave them advises. and slytherin is ambitious and determined, great traits to succeed. u got to be ambitious and determined enough to succeed in anything. so put a few good words in for slytherin :p

Did you say Susan's father is a Half-blood or a Muggleborn, the last one makes no sense about arranged marriage. Bones is a mixed family according to Wiki and with not knowing Susan's parents, have her dad in Ravenclaw is cool while Amelia & Edgar (died 1981, Old Order Member) both said to be Hufflepuffs, Susan's issues with that still slightly weird only due to her Mum being a Slytherin & silent supporter of Voldemort it makes some sense. Sorry, it was just something I realised.

You might mean 18th birthday as hermione is the oldest student.

Oops, I noticed the next paragraph and how they are giving the trio the time to consider joining or not, sorry.

Just I quick note; unless someone was born in August I believe that Harry is the youngest of his year group and Hermione the oldest born in September. So you are giving Susan, Hannah and Justin August birthdays with you didn't mean to say end of September.

Dragon was the first task not the second, the lake was the second

I thought that Tonks was 24-25 to Remus 36-37 not 30 like you wrote as she is about the same age as Charlie, as that is why Remus had trouble accepting that she wanted him or did you make her older to get around that issue.

Good

Great job almost as good as JK

Hello,
This is 3rd time I've read your storie! it is just as wonderfull as, the 1st time! Thanks for writing it! I am such a H&G fan. I don't ŕeaď as much as I use to. But I read your stories in a week several nights I just kept reading. I thought I would never find this story again as I started rereading old stories again thanks for the ride!
Miss Millie

Best hermione Severus scene!

I'm enjoying the story although the savior of the wizarding world seems to have become rather insignificant is he going to be mostly ignored until it's time to kill voldemort and then forgotten again. He also seems to be fairly indifferent to the fact that one of his best friends is exploiting his name and making money from his unwanted fame he seems more like a commodity and occasional talking point than anyone valued and important.

Two words discribe this story and those are: fucking amazing! The way you put it all together was incredible. I didn't like the snape/hermy ship before now but the way you blended it. I can't even describe in words... You should write your own novel series. All my support.. I look forward to reading more of you work.