Oh, well I see that the previous review that I posted didn't got all of it... probably because it was too long... yeah... so here's the rest of it that doesn't involve the word 'wait'.
'sooooooooo, is Danny dead now? Like fully dead? I mean I know he's in a coma, but still. And I may or may not of put some more 'wait' in here... :P

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Keep writing its great ! Please don't stop writing the story!

this was sooooo good. why stop there?

That saddens me so much...

This was too sad for me to say anything.

NO!:( Needs sequel. Danny needs to be rescued!

No way! Danny deserves a happy life. Can you make a sequal or something that has his parents reversing the effects of the gun? Please!

No way! Danny deserves a happy life. Can you make a sequal or something that has his parents reversing the effects of the gun? Please!

waah! it's very sad...but that would be a jazz thing to do to save harry!

it was good

Yeah . . . really good first fic! Better than mine at least. I don't have an account *sigh*. I think this should become a full length fic. I'd like to see Danny wake up, and he tells his parents. Also . . . 1 hour and 10 minutes until Ultimate Enemy comes out!

It was a little short, but Ok I guess. I think that you should maybe make a sequel, or another chapter, or something. I know it must be boring to hear it, though. sorry.

the only problem I have with it is that the story seems kind of detatched from itself. you should have gotten more in depth with it. on the plus side, I liked the way you put it on jazz's pov, and danny worrying about the inventions. i'd never thought of it before.

Well, good luck with your writing!

Don't make this a one shot! Please, please continue. I want to know whether or not Danny is ever cured of the coma. I mean, they created the weapon, right? So they should be able to create a cure.

That was so sad! I was hyper when I read your other story a few minutes ago, but now I'm sad! I noticed that you said "If you read it reveiw it" and I totally agree. I've just found out that there are people that have my story on their favorites list or story alert that haven't reveiwed! That really irks me! So... I just thought that I'd reveiw your wonderful, depressing, ingenious one-shot so that I wouln't be a hypocrite by reading and not reveiwing! Good luck with your other fics!