Just brilliant.

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Incredible ending. I loved your conclusion. It really shows the struggle between Wesley and his father. Loved it.

poor, poor Mina. i feel so bad for her but i like the way wesley handled himself. great chapters. i think i will add you to my list of authors to check out since this is a very good story.

What is he telling him about New Zealand. Is Mina his mom?

so wes and his dad are having a heart to heart?

i like how you made Natalie cursing at Welsey in German. His father does like to pry, doesn't he?

I can't wait to find out more about Mina! Good chapter.

Wesley's mum drugs herself?

I like that they think he's a vampire. I can imagine Wesley's dad freaking out.

good first chapter, i really like this story.

Thoughtful, intelligent, and gut-wrenching. I commend you; this story is going to stay in my thoughts for some time. You wrote this brilliantly, seeing into Wesley's soul in a way that is simply amazing. Roger, his father, was equally complex, and their interaction all the more interesting for that. Great job at dealing with an established character, and a not-so-established character. :)

wow...that was...GREAT. I mean the ending was such a cliff hanger.

AWESOME! the details of the charactyers were astounding. Brilliant!

I wasn't trying to imply that that was a *bad* thing. Just commenting on how in tune with the show the "no forgiveness" thing is. I mean this is a whole show about redemtion, and nobody on it *ever* forgives anything.