That was awesome :D I loved the end. The whole story was sort of serious and funny at the same time, and the end was like a bomb. Awesome!

This is a cool story. I really like the timeline thing, kinda reminds me of 24. The ending was funny, too.

LMAO! Awesome story! Had me thinkin' the entire time that it was something super top secret and important! Literally had me on the edge of my seat!

XD That was good!

Right now, I'm laughing really, really hard. It hurts. You are one, awesome author, dude. Can't wait to read the rest of your things.

I love the ending!

I LOVED it! And just as you probably want all readers to think, I thought that it was some top secret disc that could, like, turn New York into dog food if it wasn't turned in on time...

Hi that was really funny. I thought the disk was related to Don's new job but I was wrong again.

After seeing your name on Fallen H's review page I thought I'd check you out...and realized that of course I know who you are! This is another one of my favorites, and I feel bad for not reviewing it sooner.

What an original idea...you honestly kept the action flowing the whole time, and I had no idea that it was all for a movie return! Haven't we all had to do this before? It's amazing the lengths one will go to avoid a four dollar late fee! Hahah!

All the love, Sassyblondexoxo

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I...LOVE...this...story. I love it so much! *especially being the Raph fangirl that I am* *koff**Koff* _U

Excellent job. I've seldom read stories by authors as skilled as you are. And this one's so action packed! I can't wait to read all the other stories you've written.

The demented NASCAR driver is a wonderful similie. You got into Raph's head quite nicely. He is just such a wonderful and certainly complex character.

Just an odd little comment. He talks big, but he also seems to be know that Donnie, under the right circumstances, would be quite capable of giving him the beating of his life. (It's not just in fics, where I see it a lot. It's in the new series too.)

THE LAST LINE IS CLASSIC! I love it! heehee. That was great.

That was funny! I loved it!

Lol That was great! Hahaha! Only Don could make something like that seem important and only Raph could have pulled THAT off! Nice job dude!

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This was a good story. Although I'm not a huge Raph fan, I thought it was well written. I think it's funny how at the end it was a DVD instead of a computer disk or something. Great job1