darn thia brougth tears..like this is what would have happened if...

Loved this story, with all its twists, turns, and suspense. You should be proud of it!

This was really amazing. I loved all the characters and how Peter himself was dragged into all this. The unveil of the murderer at the end was really surprising (I can't believe I was prejudiced and thought they were a man all this time) and the scene when Peter found out the kid was dead was really emotional and well written. I loved this story, good work!

Wow. What a great thriller. Really sobering though. Definitely one for the favorites.

wow. i loved this story!

definately a fav!

haha. i just felt the need to share that as i was reading this chapter, a hilarious video of a man dressed as spiderman was on AFV. what a coincidence. ]

lol. sorry.

great story so far!

**continues reading**

Wow, that's kind of depressing. Don't know if that's what you were going for. There just wasn't much of a satisfying ending, you know? But that's okay, it was still a good story, just really sad and maybe a little anticlimactic. :-)

Oh wow. That was amazing.

You write great suspence stories- I wasn't sure if Peter's identity would be found out or not! You kept me reading right on the edge of my seat pretty much the whole time (I had to eat sometime ya know). You did a really good job with all of the different characters, their personalities and actions and stuff. And of course no one would really suspect a girl to be the killer! With that twisted mind and everything, I was pretty sure that the killer was male!

This was just an awesome story- now to check out what other stories you've read. *goes to closetfan's homepage*

fantastic story. I really enjoyed it!

Good suspense is rare to find in fanfiction, so thank you for a wonderful tale!

Damn, ow. Well written...

BRAVO! BRAVO! Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece (although I would have loved to see a little more MJ...) but overall, you should be very pround of it. Well Done. Very worth reading!

*Applauds* Brilliant, amazing ending, especially the scene with Peter crying over the boy's body! Didn't see that coming, and it was so well written! And AHA! So it was a woman from the train! I had no idea she'd be from the train but I thought maybe it might be a woman - you dropped a hint somewhere in a chapter that I can't remember, and always referred to her as 'the killer', never he or she specifically. I'll go back and reread the whole thing in one go when I have the time. So well done, the whole thing tied up nicely and there was never a moment of boredom what with all those cliffhangers! Any plans for more long Spidey fics or even a sequel to this one? :D

Who would have thought that the killer was a woman. What a shocker. The part where she found out that Peter was Spider-Man when he took her down was terrific. In the end, it was good that some of the people that Peter told to leave stayed to help him deal with the aftermath of what happened was a good thing. Pete almost did something that he would've regretted. It's too bad the boy died but it added impact to the story. It was nice to see JJ downplay the Spider-Man angle on the story. Who woulda thought that he would do that. An awesome ending to a wonderful story.

That ending was kinda unexpected hehe

Loved the story and hope you write some more