in a strange and REALLY disturbing way...that was actually really cute

*tears hair out* im confused. so.. the ghost is.. the dead person? or the criminal? . or were there more than one ghost in the story? hah? im confusing myself. yah well, great story :]

very very VERY well written.

This is a lovely story. I love how you described the character's eyes in that (in a way) they spoke as if they were the character's personality, and all was revealed in the bright gleam of an eye. This is a very good story and I hope I can read more from you soon. _ ~Hakiri~