I'm surprised this was your first story. I like it best.

Ok, why is Bella left stupified where anyone can liberate her? Why don't they cut off her arms and break her wand, so she can't rejoin the battle?

I can't tell which woman is speaking in the section with Minerva And Hermione

Well written

What proposal to the ministry?

Short and sweet.

very well done

Omg I love your story so creative and realistic!

00Sevvie?! I . This is permanently in my “Top 10 Things said in a Snager fic.”

It just occurred to me, but where is Crookshanks? I hope he shows up later.

I think I read this a long time ago. Gah! It's the best feeling when you find a wonderful fic again!

I remember reading this fic *years* ago, and it stuck with me all that time. I missed it so much that I went and found it again and have read it twice since then. It truly is a well-written piece of fiction, and is a beautiful story of two very well characterized people.

That was one of the best marriage law stories I've read. Great job. I love how you kept Severus's personality but still had some touching/endearing moments. Wonderful!

loved this!

I loved it.