This was kind of gross to read. Too much information

I don't get it

OMFG! That story made me tingly! (\_/) keep it up,its so beautiful! I like Krad's mood swings,and you ooc'd them just right! There is no dowt that you are the greatest yaoi author you were a boy i'd kiss you! _ and if you are: 0.o

Whe...sex...

Awesome story even though I've already read it. lol but i still like it and wish i could write like you.

Manda

sweet story even though i've read this one beofre but i still like it. I wish mine were that good. I want to read the rest of it. i know there's more. ttfn

Manda

Okay- well it was a bit wierd and it lacks description but I like your plot so far. Think about give the characters more thought so you know what they think of whats happinging. Please update soon!

Keep up the friggin' awesome work!

Aw what a CUTE story..they were in love at 11? adorable.

Aw this is a really cute story

plese update soon

keep up th good wok

please do the next part its so good.i love do the first again.

I really hope the next chapter is longer. And I'm a bit comfused how they grew up together if they've been going through generations. Oh well *sighs* I'll have to get to reading the series.

good

good flashback.

So young yet already in love with each other.

Can't wait to see what you make happen next?

Don't make us wait too long.

Your stories are great.

(Cries) This was the bestest chapter yet! I love it more than my friends Patrick (Patrick: HEY!) and DArk (Dark:WHAT!)... (Sob!) Please don't do the author's note. It sucks and it's a waste of your time. Just update the next chapter as soon as you can!