| Reviews for Too Much Water |
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   Paine3 chapter 3 . 6/25/2005 oh lord i'm suffocating from trying to hold in my laughter! *Takes deep breath* ok all better now. That was a hilarious story. I get chills when i think what might have happened if she had drank the glass of water. |
| Annoymous chapter 3 . 12/23/2004 LOL I think i may have died of have to write more chapters! |
| Beautifully Kaotic chapter 3 . 12/1/2004 yeah plz make it very very long - I wouldn't bear for this funny fic to end so soon :P |
| kingleby chapter 3 . 11/30/2004 please don't make it the last chapter! i love this story, its so funny! _ |
| kingleby chapter 2 . 11/30/2004 oh man baralai trying to kiss brother was so funny! _ and when he threw poor gippal out the window and he belly flopped i couldn't stop laughing! man this story is ace _ |
| Ikonopeiston chapter 3 . 11/30/2004 " Nooj, who was discussing hair care with Yuna." Just lovely! Perfectly conceived. I have recommended this story to a large group of associates and hope they will give you some sterling reviews. BTW: Watch your verbs etc. You have a few places in which you have used the wrong tense etc. Nothing serious. |
| Avelera chapter 2 . 11/29/2004 OMFG, I died. This is so &%$%$ funny that I'm actually going to beg for you to update soon. Pwease? |
| The RyRy chapter 2 . 11/29/2004 Okay, this definitely amused me. It's a silly concept, yes, but at least it was well-written. I really liked your portrayal of Rikku - her voice really comes through well in the few moments that you spend on her. May I suggest spending more time writing fics from her point of view? *snickers* Poor Baralai, getting punched by Brother. |
| Ikonopeiston chapter 2 . 11/29/2004 This is so funny it is immune from criticism from me. Pray continue. |
| Beautifully Kaotic chapter 2 . 11/28/2004 one word to describe this chapter...HILARIOUS! (is that how u spell it o_0? lol)poor yunie lol and gippal throwing himself on top of nooj and then thrown out of the windo now thats soon pwez *puppy eyes* 3 |
| Beautifully Kaotic chapter 1 . 11/24/2004 Why did u stop here? MORE MORE MORE! |
| kingleby chapter 1 . 11/23/2004 i;ve been wanting to review this for days now but with being so weird...anyway man that was so funny! i can't wait to see what they do! _ lol, nooj and a pony... |
| Ikonopeiston chapter 1 . 11/23/2004 It is not permitted to stop in the middle of an episode without so much as a promise to continue. You have amused and intrigued me. Now - deliver on the promise. |
| Aputhee chapter 1 . 11/20/2004 oh no... is there gonna be another chapter to this? |
