Oh my god I only discovered your story now but it is so so so different. I mean I already read stories where Harry is a slave but the way you make references to our own world is very interesting and it makes me want to read more each time !

I thought your story was great. I was looking through the comments to see that a lot of people were dissapointed with the ending, but I thought the ending was good. Very realistic. And I liked the slow buildup between the two. Also realistic. I didn’t mind the interruptions during the plot, I liked the background information. You’re a great writer, and I hope that you have continued writing. :)

Wow, i really like your Story. It is funny written, i liked the Voice of the author inbetween and the promising happy ending for our Boys :) Continue writing, you're good. Thanks for this fic

I loved this. It's very well written. Even your interruptions, though somewhat distracting sometimes, did add a sense of self-awareness that made the story more fun. The feel of this story is sort of like a comedic fairytale - especially at the end. I enjoyed this story a whole lot.

That's an interesting name ya got there

I loved the story and your an amazing writer but I was slightly disappointed by the ending, but it was still amazing anyway!

Good job. But I wish they had stayed together or parted only for a couple three weeks. I'm in a romantic mood.

This story absolutely made my day. Your voice as the narrator was perfect, and I especially loved when you did the whole backstory in parenthesis! You are an amazing storyteller and writer, and you and this story are definitely getting favorites from me!

Hey, good story. The ending could use a little polishing and romanticizing up instead of just ending with a bunch of statements. Also it's ceased not seized. Seized is when you grab something or shake around and can die. Cease is when something stops.

i'm one of those BUT! only in a draco/blaise. But i like blaise if he's paired up with hermione or probablu seamus or ron (i've read couple of fics with those pairings). Coz i potray(is this the right word) blaise as draco's best friend and nothing else.

While I'm disappointed with the ending, I think you're a wonderful writer! I absolutely love your writing style! It's beautiful:)

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Just that ?!
Not anymore ?!
Few years ?! you make them spare until few years ?!
I want more , more story of them .
Are this have sequel ?

Totally did not expect that!

I have an agonizingly strong urge to not finish this story only because you keep interrupting its telling! I will continue to struggle through reading it because I am genuinely curious as to how it ends. When you are focused on the plot, this story is amazing! Yes, I can see how some of the background you provide in your interruptions can be important, however, order of operations is key in writing! If you cannot insert the information in a organized and flowing fashion, perhaps it is not needed. By making references to readers and yourself, you break the illusion you are trying to create!

On a positive note I would like to say I genuinely like the plot so far, and your imagery is very well done. I will continue reading this story and if I love it in the morning I'll be sure to Favorite.

Please do not mistake my constructive criticism for abuse! I hope you keep writing; you seem to have a knack for it.