Ok, I like your stories but have noticed some inconsistencies. You have said Tempora quite a few times in both this fic and Professional Hero when I think it should be Termina. The same happened here. It's Castor WIlds not Carston Wilds.

Keep up the good work

Aki

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I loved all the back story into the Link’s life as the Black Death and the fact that Raven spawned generations of heros. Cant wait to read more of your fan fics they all have great history in them and I love how u are contecting them all toegher I am rly glad u didn’t let it die and are contuiung the story with the kids making it a more orginal with Links kids doing all this adventuring instead of link himself put a nice change on things accually. Another great story by a great artist.

Hydro: Awesome story. Very awesome. _ Will you write a sequal? You don't have too, but I think it would be cool.

Shadow:The Black Death...interesting...

Hydro: I just read the chapters that I've missed, cuz I haven't been able to get to the computer in a while. But I love this fic. Its goin in my faves! And I believe I owe you this: *gives you a big cyber cookie* Laterness!

Oh dear. So Ezlo has evil plans.

This can't be good. No, not good at all.

Hooray, Vaati is defeated!

So...what now?

Okay, final battle time! Four Swords, UNITE!

Yay! go Franklin. You should have killed William though. Unless you've got other plans for him. update soon.

Maple can speak to the dead? And wishes she could summon them? Oo Creepy...

good first opening chapter, and i congradulate for coutinueing to stick to the less well known (ok so four swords is cool, but i'm sure you no what i mean.) Zelda games, you have a knack for that kind of stuff

Sorry that it took me so long to review your chapters, but I was incredably busy at both college and home. But I just loved the new installments of your story. Man William tricked us all, but I have a felling that he will get his dues, for one thing that I have learned to stear clear of is a mad woman, And she is one pissed woman. I 'almost' feel sorry for the poor fella. I really liked the way that you handled the last boss, and dungeon. Well Till next time.

Dragan and the gang.

We, they got all four swords and four elements. Awesomeness! Hooray!

Uh, now what?

Another great chapter. Question element is the fourth sword. Also kill Willam I don't care how just kill him. Update soon okay.

Hmm. Would have thought the Shadow Shrine would be more like the infamous temple, all creepy and stuff. Dirt seems more like something you'd find in the Earth Temple.

I just realised osmehting... isn't Dekaru a boy? o_O?