Reviews for Un'ombra solitaria |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You piss right the hell off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this stroy please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Need more |
![]() ![]() LET HER DIE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 1: - The Potters were not in a mansion at the time of the attack. The Potter family Mansion had been destroyed and they were living in Godric's Hollow. -Why are they just standing there watching Voldemort walk up? -Is the prophecy changed so it does not say, "mark him as his equal" so Rory could be the child of prophecy? - What is Rory short for? Chapter 2 -Where are Sirius and Remus? -What does Harry living have to do with the twins not going to the Dursleys? -Who are the Santo's that Dumbledore trusts them so much? -If Harry is such a hateful child why is their home described as Happy? -Harry was about 8 when he attacked a reporter, isn't that a little violent? -What manipulation is in that letter? -Why does the head mistress show every student around if they can show up whenever? -Why have any sibling trying to kill animals? -Why would Harry just respond to a snake? How did he know it was the snake? Why wasn't he more shocked? How come he had never run into a snake before? -Where did Harry hear the name Riddle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice! I cant wait to see harry go balistic on tommy boy! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where are Sirius and Remus? How will they react to how Harry's been treated? And Rory's behavior? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... this story could be good one, but it hasn't been continued in over 6 years. Yeah, it's pretty darn dead. Well, I hope it updates again at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is the biggest tool/fool ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazing so please update soon cuz its not fair to us youre devoted readers to have to wait for 5 yrears for another update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry pours water on the incense. Trelawny whirled to face him and started to freak out. "Withdrawl!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was gonna suck, but its actually pretty cute. |
![]() ![]() story is cool and all but that letter hardly counts as manipulation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my goddess! its a real life GOOD WrongBoyWhoLived (or in this case Girl) story! I'm amazed someone had the guts to actually make this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |